FIRST EDIT: Sooz Aug 19
*Question - First paragraph, who/what are the "maui" ? I want to correct this sentence structure to read something like, "... - the same plant that the Maui people use to make tapa cloths", but I am unsure if this is what is meant by the reference. Please clarify, thanks!
Si Aug 20-please see changes in red.
Si Aug 31: a little Intro is needed. Please revise my draft.
Many puer lovers have been curious about the special cake form. How do those loose leaves bei
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